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How to Shorten a Funeral Program Paragraph Without Losing Its Meaning

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Shortening is most effective when you remove repetition rather than important facts. A readable paragraph is more useful than the same story squeezed into tiny type.

Edit in two passes

First remove sentences repeating an earlier idea. Then shorten phrases such as was someone who always to always. Preserve the event, relationship, and specific detail that give the memory its meaning.

Final check

Read the edited paragraph next to the original and ask whether its emotional point has changed.

Apply this to your design

Use an available four-page US Letter booklet layout, then review the cover, two inside pages, and back before downloading.

Choose a four-page funeral program template

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